A Good Speech? For a Bit of Drama?

“I struggled and it made the whole ordeal a lot more painful, eventually I managed to pull him off, there was blood dripping down his lips, I shoved him to the ground but he got up before I’d even had a chance to turn around. He was there in front of me once again but this time I noticed my TV aerial had fallen of the roof and a metal pole was lying by my feet so I picked it up and smacked him round the head with it, then I ran for the back door and locked it behind me. Then when I looked into the garden he as gone, no where to be seen.” she finished slowly.

One of the characters is attacked. this is her explaining the ordeal to the main character Zoe. does it need more drama?