more description needed? any comments welcome :D
STOP! whats the betting most of you are gonna skip this blog? well am i right? of course, even if you don't become a member at least comment and let me know what you think. I have read all my books i want a really good one so i have decided to write my own. i will post parts on here for some feedback, not whole chapters as i don't want work stolen :D PLEASE REMEMBER IT IS ALL MY WORK PLEASE DON'T STEAL IT OH and please feed the fish ;P
Wednesday, August 3, 2011
A Possible Dream
That night Zoë was visited by the dreams that had haunted her childhood. The room was perfectly round and painted a deep blood red. A door to her right creaked open and a man walked in, she turned around to great him. “Princess, your parents asked me to come, you understand what I am here to do?” he asked , she nodded. The man came closer, he was much taller than she was, about as tall as her dad. He took hold of her head in his hands, her hair engulfing them, and he started to whisper, “Your parents are sending you away to safety, after tonight you will not remember this night or any other night before, 11 years from now when you are 16 someone will come to you and bring you home.” he paused and looked deep into her eyes, “Your name is Zoë Crombie, your parents are Hannah and Luke Crombie, your grandparents died before you were born, you grew up in Alaska but moved to England when you were 4.” she released her and she fell forwards into his arms.
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